Science tells us the activites which are good for our health and which are bad. Millions of people all over the world know this and still do unhealthy acitvites. Why do think this is and what can be done to change this.
In the present age, unhealthy habits of citizens around the globe is of major concern to the government. Science has provided enough evidence regarding the ill effects of smoking and unhealthy dietary habits, still it has been observed that millions of people adapt to this lifestyle. In my opinion, it is due to lack of supervision and modern lifestyle.
To begin with, youngsters start smoking at an early age to fit in the cool crowd, this is maily due to peer pressure. They are well aware of the drawbacks of consuming tobacco but due to lack of supervision and guidance from teachers and parents they take up this habits. As a result, there has been an increase in the number of cancer patients and lung disorders. Secondly, the growth of fast food chains has led to availability of low cost unhealthy food which is a hit among working professionals. As they have no time to cook for themselves or family they depend on food that is easily available, in this case fast food. As a result, increasing number of citizensa re diagnosed with heart issues and obesity. The fast moving urban lifestyle and lack of guidance to adolescents are the prime reasons for city dwellers to indulge in unhealthy habits.
Government needs to actively participate in spreading awarness about the harmful effects of unhealthy habits. They should invest in campaigns and social clubs, which can provide supoort to those who wish to change their routine. Moreover, it will benefit the government to invest in awarness programmes today rather than bearing the burden on health care tomorrow. In addition, organic food consumption must be encouraged to improve the diet. The above aforementioned solutions can help in acheiving a healthy society.
To sum up, neglegance on part of citizens is due to lack of supervision and drawbacks of modern lifestyle, to overcome this phenomenon government needs to take charge of the situation and move their citizens towards better living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... from teachers and parents they take up this habits. As a result, there has been an ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0244648318 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76055166136 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.464297535 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163354626518 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451354390656 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410239430629 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914280429243 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297167972054 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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