Scientific research should be the responsibility of governments rather than commercial organizations Do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Scientific research should be the responsibility of governments rather than commercial organizations. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is generally considered the research and development of scientific field is the area in which states should play the major role and private companies has not part in this stream. I completely agree with notion that authorities has to take the accountability of the scientific investigation and advancements and no freedom should be given to commercial firm to spread their wings in this domain.

To begin with, it requires huge amount of time to study deeply about any particular field, private companies mainly aim to earn profit, so the task which takes more time usually avoided by them. Most of the researches are mainly trying to find something for the betterment of the society and cause social development, which undoubtedly needs government intervention. To exemplify, public university in India take the help of PHG students to work on internship along with studies as research associates, whereas it is cumbersome for any commercial organization to recruit the employee at that salary. Moreover, university students spend almost five years to the get the knowledge of the subject in-depth so that can perform much better for making further advancement in the particular field.

Digging deeper, many resources are essential for conducting any research successfully like monetary support, space and equipment. Although after getting all the elements it is not guaranteed that it will be successful. Companies cannot effort to invest money on the segment where return is not guaranteed, but government can have the separate budget for the research and development, those fund can be freely use for conducting different experiments, furthermore, help of various nations can also be availed. Apart from this, if private organizations succeed in getting any new finding they will charge heavily to supply it in market and ultimately it will not be afforded by many people. Hence, fulfillment of vital requirement to conduct research can be done by state only.

In conclusion, unequivocally companies can carry out research, but if we want to conduct the scientific advancement in meaningful way then this responsibility is to be put on the shoulder of the government, then only society will get the benefit and progression can be carried out in ideal way.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... monetary support, space and equipment. Although after getting all the elements it is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, apart from, as to, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28729281768 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02046780926 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588397790055 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5352045894 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.5 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231692704182 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082363056307 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572264750359 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146164289508 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062812904267 0.056905535591 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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