SHOPPING IS A DANGEROUS BECAUSE IT MAKES PEOPLE SELFISH , AND CARELESS WITH MONEY.DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE ?
IN OUR SOCIETY, SHOPPING HAS BECOME THE MEDIUM OF ENTERTAINMENT FOR VARIOUS CONSUMERS.AND I AM COMPLETELY CONCUR WITH THIS STATEMENT THAT SHOPPING HAS CREATED A DEVASTATING EFFECT ON OUR SOCIETY AS IT MAKES PEOPLE MORE SELFCENTERED AND CONSIDERABLY MORE CAREFREE UNLIKE EVER BEFORE. TO DELINEATE MY VIEWS, I WILL HIGHLIGHT SOME REASONS FOR MY OPINION IN THE FORTHCOMING PARAGRAPH BEFORE PROPOSING CONCLUSION.
TO BEGIN WITH, SHOPPING WORKS AS A STRESSBUSTER FOR SOME PEOPLE WHO REMAINS BUSY IN THEIR ENDLESS WORKALCOHLIC ROUTINE.BUT I THINK THERE ARE VARIOUS OTHER OPTIONS TO GET RELIEF RATHER THEN WASTING MONEY ON THOSE THINGS WHICH YOU DON’T REALLY NEED. FOR INSTANCE , YOU CAN SPEND YOUR QUALITY TIME WITH YOUR FAMILY OR TRAVEL SOMEWHERE WITH YOUR FRIENDS WHICH HAS LEFT YOU WITH PRECIOUS MOMENTS THAT YOU CAN CAPTURE AND KEEP WITH YOU THROUGHOUT YOUR LIFETIME. ON OTHER HAND, UNNECCESARILY SHOPPING ONLY GIVES YOU PLEASURE FOR SOME TIME PERIOD.
SECONDLLY , ADVERTISEMENT INFLUENCE CONSUMERS TOWARDS THE PRODUCT WHICH MAKE THEM TEMPT AND LED THEM TO BUY ALL PRODUCTS.SOMETIMES PEOPLE DON’T HAVE MONEY TO BUY PRODUCTS INSTANTLY BUT THE FACILITIES LIKE DEBIT CARD , SMART CARD, CREDIT CARD NEVER MAKES THEM TO FEEL LIKE THAT THEY DON’T EARN MONEY YET WHICH THEY ARE GOING TO SPEND.CONSEQUENTLY, THESE THING GET THEM INTO TROUBLE WHEN THEY CAME UNDER HEAVY DEBTS.FOR INSTANCE AMID CRONA PANDEMIC, LOCKDOWN HAS DEVASTATING THE LIFE OF MANY PEOPLE WHO DON’T HAVE SAVINGS AND BELLIEVE TO LIVE IN PRESENT TIME.
CONCLUSIVELY , CONSIDERING ALL THE VIEWS I AM OF THE OPINION THAT UNNECERARILY SHOPPING IS A SHORT TERM PLEASURE AND MAKE THE PEOPLE FAR MORE SELFCENTERED AND INDISCLINED IN THEIR LIFE WHICH ONLY RESULTS IN HARMFUL MANNER.
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...OUS OTHER OPTIONS TO GET RELIEF RATHER THEN WASTING MONEY ON THOSE THINGS WHICH YOU...
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...HICH YOU DON’T REALLY NEED. FOR INSTANCE , YOU CAN SPEND YOUR QUALITY TIME WITH YO...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, really, second, so, then, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3115942029 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95077817478 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.97406229 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.428571429 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.4285714286 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223357593098 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099495863945 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487883387872 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123151857115 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051299740859 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.0946893788 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.