Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activities in many countries for young adults.
Why is this?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Many modern adolescents tend to go shopping in their spare time. The main reason behind this tendency is that people’s communication switched to online, meanwhile people still need in-person connections and shopping has become one of the ways to do it. In my opinion, it is a negative trend because there are better ways to spend leisure time.
The main reason why shopping is on the rage among teenagers is that malls have become entertainment centers where customers can have social and emotional experiences such as face-to-face interaction with friends. It is a powerful combination of fun, entertainment, food, and drinks, which is incredibly appealing for youngsters. In addition, it is an easy and safe option as it combines real-life communication with peers, the opportunity to play games, and enjoy meals together for a reasonable price. Thus, it is quite convenient and fun.
Nevertheless, I think that it is rather negative than positive development because modern adolescents already have a sedentary lifestyle and do not have enough physical activity. As a result, a large amount of young people is overweight or obese. It is obvious that spending time with friends in food courts in supermarkets eating fast food, which is high in saturated fat, salt, and sugar, contributes to a lack of a healthy lifestyle for the younger generation. Instead, it would be much better for them to spend time on sports, hiking, and other energy-consuming activities.
In conclusion, shopping has become popular due to the fact that it is the cheapest and the easiest option for teenagers including real-life experience of interaction with each other, entertainment, and food. Despite the above-mentioned advantages of this kind of leisure time, I believe that it is a negative tendency among youngsters because young people should have an active life in order to be healthy and physically fit.
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...order to be healthy and physically fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24590163934 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0977516966 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0147911631 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201619017914 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608016500806 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431273589839 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118110670676 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445722548795 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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