Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
The word shopping is just like the mood elevator now days especially for the young adults.In olden days people were not much familiar with shopping when compared to current sitution.shopping made one of the more intresting forms of the free time activity of the people mainly for th youngers.In this essay we will briefly discuss about the reason for that,impact of this on the otherhand as well.
Firstly, i would like to discuss how shopping has turned into a popular activity during leisure time .For example, the young adults these days willing to update themselves in every feild with the updating generation,however it is one of the main cause we can say because of this,youngers are mainly attracted towards shopping mostly at their free time.Most probably youngstars pay attention in buying new things in the market which are just arrived to the stores.
An another reson for the yougstars to get famiiar with shopping is just the online shopping technology,which from when came into the conciration made the young adults more attracted towards it.online shoppoing of things made easier and sophisticated as it has all the variety of goods at different range of price.Univesally thougt that online shopping is aniresting and smarter way of shopping.By this way it could besaid beneficial development
Finally, young adults on the other hand have the both negtive and as well as possitive effect of this ativity on the development.Younger adults in thier age will not have enough experience or knowledge about all the things which happens i the market due to which it would turn into a negative reflection for them.Apart from this it also make adults to improve their online knowledge for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, apart from, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1103202847 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98258009023 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562277580071 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 93.0 20.2975951904 458% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.169944185 49.4020404114 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 478.666666667 106.682146367 449% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 93.6666666667 20.7667163134 451% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.0 7.06120827912 552% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344537281551 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234825227854 0.084324248473 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271614052576 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205508337549 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490870662438 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.5 13.0946893788 378% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.92 50.2224549098 -46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.2 10.1190380762 387% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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