Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
It is true that youngsters prefer to go for shopping in their free time and it is becoming a famous hobby among them. There are numerous factors which contribute in this increasing trend of shopping like staying up to date and diversion from the worries of the life. Although shopping is gaining popularity among youth, but I assert that overall it is having adverse impact on both individuals and society.
Pitching into the first area of discussion, considering the reasons, why youth opt to shop in their ideal time rather than involving in other activities. The predominant reason is, in this modern era everybody wants to follow he latest fashion and try to have latest clothing and accessories . Because people who are update with equipment's are more accepted by society. Studies have shown that sales of fashionable apparel's has increased more than 200% from the last few years. Apart from this many individuals prefer shopping as stress buster. They claim that when they go for buying things, they enjoy their time and forget about all their work life pressure. Therefore shopping is gaining popularity in many parts of he world.
However, it has huge negative impacts. Many times when youngsters go for shopping they become extravagant and spend their hard earned money on the things which are not actually required. Whereas, they plough their earning for the future requirements. Moreover, young people these days are blindly following the fashion without giving a deep though whether it is wise decision to purchase the things which is not a necessity. People have to face peer pressure, who are not financially sound enough to spend so much, they feel down and neglected, which hampers their social life. Due to lack of equality community also divides into different groups and strength of unity will be missing.
In conclusion, unequivocally youth spend most of their spare time on shopping, but it has drawbacks. This world will be a better place if people lead simple life and opt to purchase things which are essential
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'he the latest'.
Suggestion: he the latest
...is modern era everybody wants to follow he latest fashion and try to have latest clothing...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the latest'.
Suggestion: have the latest
... to follow he latest fashion and try to have latest clothing and accessories . Because peop...
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Suggestion: .
... to have latest clothing and accessories . Because people who are update with equi...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... have latest clothing and accessories . Because people who are update with equipments a...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...othing and accessories . Because people who are update with equipments are more accepte...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...get about all their work life pressure. Therefore shopping is gaining popularity in many ...
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Message: Did you mean 'of the world'?
Suggestion: of the world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04437869822 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54168097617 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597633136095 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9893211149 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7222222222 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146405829073 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496186677159 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422005960115 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921153952778 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275839073481 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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