Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In today’s world, shopping has become a well-known habit among youngsters in majority of countries. This has risen many questions on its reasons and impacts. Globalization has played a prime role in this recent hike in shopping habits. In my opinion, this shopping binge is not good for individuals and society.
Firstly, the advent of shopping malls and globalization have changed the people’s shopping methods. Individuals get attracted towards the luminous shops and decorated halls while shopping which motivates them to go to these places very often. Additionally, clothing trend is changing very rapidly nowadays, and, therefore, young people want to purchase new garments very frequently. For example, if a new type of shirt is introduced in market, many gents want to buy it as a hobby. Availability of products and widespread of shops made shopping as an important time passing activity.
On the other hand, excessive shopping is definitely a negative development. Although people treat shopping as a good hobby, it has all the possible aspects of becoming an addiction. It will drive people to depression when they have do not enough money to go for their shopping routine. Moreover, enormous shopping could encourage production of cheap products which lack at originality and quality. To illustrate, consumers buying everything which manufacturers produce will imply that people are not interested in products’ authenticity anymore. Consequently, a myriad of cheap goods will be forged and sold to customers.
In conclusion, it is evident that shopping has reached its peak level as a free time hobby. The factors, such as youngsters with financial freedom and the conversion of the world as a single market, contributed to this movement. If it is not regularised, this will not be a positive improvement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39930555556 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12004043171 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8331032886 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.3888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19229164443 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653405752931 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466070085396 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124545874295 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449197965623 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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