Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Recent decades have witnessed a sudden increase in the number of diseases because of poverty and lack of awareness about hygiene among some uneducated people.It is argued by a certain group of people that providing vaccination is the responsibility of the Governments to create a healthy society, while others think that it is a personal right to get their children immunised. I agree with the prior statement and the reasons will be discussed in this essay.
In general, Government is Implementing certain rules and regulations for the betterment of the citizens in the form of laws.Several laws have been passed during a particular period of time to eradicate the crimes occur in the society.For example, to stop female child infanticide a severe law was passed and those who commit that mistake were seriously punished. Similarly, to stop the spread of some contagious diseases which cause intensive damage to a particular age group of people it is essential to levy a penalty on parents for not getting vaccinated their children. This would help the children to improve immune system.Subsequently, their life span would also increase.
On the other hand, leaving the obligation to give vaccine to patents choice may result in a disaster.For example, if kids are not provided with the vaccine against Hepatitis B , because of the parents carelessness the child's life would be in danger.
In conclusion,by implementing laws and also creating awareness among parents most of the younger generation would lead to a happy and healthy life.Ultimately this would definitely gives rise to a disease free community and those kids who are properly immunsied against common life threatening diseases may get longer life .
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ut hygiene among some uneducated people.It is argued by a certain group of people ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Several
...ent of the citizens in the form of laws.Several laws have been passed during a particul...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ws have been passed during a particular period of time to eradicate the crimes occur in the so...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...adicate the crimes occur in the society.For example, to stop female child infantici...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Subsequently
...p the children to improve immune system.Subsequently, their life span would also increase. ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...patents choice may result in a disaster.For example, if kids are not provided with ...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ded with the vaccine against Hepatitis B , because of the parents carelessness the...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...ne against Hepatitis B , because of the parents carelessness the childs life would be i...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
...ife would be in danger. In conclusion,by implementing laws and also creating awa...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ultimately
... would lead to a happy and healthy life.Ultimately this would definitely gives rise to a d...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...y life.Ultimately this would definitely gives rise to a disease free community and th...
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Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...threatening diseases may get longer life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26181818182 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0642781314 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.154251773 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.714285714 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2857142857 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176051692471 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817313710102 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032822366844 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104476428095 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184770353749 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ut hygiene among some uneducated people.It is argued by a certain group of people ...
^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Several
...ent of the citizens in the form of laws.Several laws have been passed during a particul...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ws have been passed during a particular period of time to eradicate the crimes occur in the so...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...adicate the crimes occur in the society.For example, to stop female child infantici...
^^^
Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Subsequently
...p the children to improve immune system.Subsequently, their life span would also increase. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...patents choice may result in a disaster.For example, if kids are not provided with ...
^^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ded with the vaccine against Hepatitis B , because of the parents carelessness the...
^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...ne against Hepatitis B , because of the parents carelessness the childs life would be i...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
...ife would be in danger. In conclusion,by implementing laws and also creating awa...
^^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ultimately
... would lead to a happy and healthy life.Ultimately this would definitely gives rise to a d...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...y life.Ultimately this would definitely gives rise to a disease free community and th...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...threatening diseases may get longer life .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26181818182 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0642781314 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.154251773 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.714285714 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2857142857 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176051692471 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817313710102 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032822366844 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104476428095 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184770353749 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.