People have different attitudes towards the vaccination. While considering the safety of their children they should follow some basic immunization program. In this essay I shall share my view about immunization.
Firstly, nowadays the whole world is expose to various kinds of disease, which spread out the different countries also. In this situation, government introduce some health practices for public and they should follow that instructions. Some essential vaccines provided by the authority is necessary for the well-being of the society. For example,polio and BCG are some important vaccines for children. If the parents do not give these for babies that may affect their health in future. Thus, parents should aware about their children better health.
Furthermore, the government have responsibility to control some communicable diseases. For this aim they arrange some erradication programs, as a part of the society people should accept this development ideas. When they not participate and ignore this immunization schedule that could negatively affect not only for their offsprings and family but also for the whole society.
However, some parents have some orthodox mentality and they don't know about the consequences of their activities. They are always try to follow some religious beliefs or traditional customs. This narrow mind pull them back ward to advantage medicines.
To conclude, for a healthy generation government and each individual should go hand to hand. The government should arrange some awareness program for public that will bring a good result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60995850622 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87195086812 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601659751037 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2791326345 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214494838233 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758431935462 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524555760101 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123296455468 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510783708192 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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