It is a fact that, nowadays most of the markets are filled with different kinds of product while, among these items limited number is holding people's attention. Advertisement is the key marketing strategy of many companies. In this essay it is a matter of debate that, in case of a good product advertising is necessary or not.I strongly believe that, this marketing technique is very beneficial for good sail.
To begin with, most of the media promote advertisement.In this modern era, majority of people depend on various kinds of media for different purpose. When they watch these modes, they get an idea about some particular products and that will help the sail. Thus, advertisement gives a strong support for things.
Furthermore, almost every companies are using some famous people as their brand ambassador. The popularity of these person's is beneficial for that product. To be clear that, most of the youngsters and children are fond of filim Stars and sports members. When they act In this type of marketing programs more and more people try to use that product. For example, some health drinks escalate their sale after the interactionof famous athletes.
However, some products are existing In markets by their quality only. These items get the mouth publicity of satisfied users and they don't need any publicity programs. People need the best and they always try to purchase that things.
To conclude, even though advertisements have a great role in marketing, the companies should careful In better quality and consumers interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18650793651 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70189725993 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.635389649 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149689736456 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507357901233 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393852986317 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783667332094 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331981623871 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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