The world has been experiencing an unchangeable phenomenon, that is ageing process.people have different opinions and attitudes towards this mechanism while,it is necessary for the existence of the world. In this essay, I shall discuss the positive and negative aspects of this topic
On the one hand, when the people become old, they get much respect and consideration from others. To be clear that, the life experience which they learn from their life brings a positive vision in life. This skills they pass to their younger generation and family. The co-operation of this relation makes senior citizens life happy and secure. Thus old age not a difficult period in life.
However, it is a fact that the people who pass the middle age have some hurdles in their life. In this modern world creats an invisible barrier for the aged people. Different from the bygone days society limit the older generations activities and participations. In this situation, the new generation justify their arguments with the help of health problems. They think that ,old age is the time for rest and they advise to takea gap from busy life.
In my opinion, old age is the period of milestone in a person's life, not only for themselves but also for the society Can utilize them wisely.
To conclude,even though some people have health problems and other issues they are the good asset and no one has waste this opportunity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94537815126 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65555858244 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59243697479 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8137411855 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5384615385 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262235928475 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917731152568 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578916066434 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143086501939 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350405029666 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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