After the completion of school education, students are generally undecided to which way they should go to. Wheather they should join a job or do graduation. In this essay I am going to discuss both views with my suggestions in the following paragraphs.
Every child is not fortunate enough to born in a wealthy family, so everyone is not in a postion to afford university education due to high tution fees they charge. Some students go through financial crisis as they have to support their family, willingly or unwillingly they have to do some job. For these students jobs will be their with minimum qualification of school education. So that they can earn and support their family as well as save to finance their university education. Another reason in its favour is, academic abilities of every students are different, some students are not capable to clear graduation so there should be some provisions in jobs so that they can be employed.
On flip side, firstly, once student start doing job they seldom return to pursue higher studies. They get involved in financial gains so deeply that the accumen to increase their qualification get withered off. Secondly, after school education opportunities of jobs are limited, the chances of futher promotions are minute so it is advisable to pursue graduation so that one can get a good job with better salary. Thirdly, innovations are necessary for job creations, student are needed to be pushed to be job providers than job seekers which is only possible if they are educated enough to research new technologies, invent new machineries and be entrepreneurs.
Finally, ultimate goal of every human being is to earn money, sooner or later he wants to see himself working. But in my opinion focus of a person should be education as knowledge helps in every field of life. It gives wings to his ambitions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95846645367 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77866755396 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1604369783 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.466666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248963994431 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903601777766 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554129607805 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163571162723 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809541095425 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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