Games are played for the entertainment as give the people much needed break from the daily working schedule. Some people feel the fun is only when they win the game else it is a heartbreak. I totally disagree with the statement. So, in this essay I will explain the enjoyment associated with games along with other benefits in the following paragraphs with my objectivity.
To begin with, Games are an important part of our life as it provide the break from monotonus life routine. Enjoyment related to games is not only in winning but also in playing and competing in them. There are numerous reason of excitement in games, first and foremost is it freshen up the mind, while one is playing the games no other thoughts cross the mind, focus is totally on the game hence it rest the mind. It helps especially when somebody is going through stress, same thoughts are running through mind again and again, playtime break that chain. Secondly, regular exercise is neccesary and it is a best way to maintain the fitness. While other execises like weight training and aerobics, they only deal with physical fitness as only body is under work but during games even mind is also involved thus it is a better way to exercise.
Adding further, games teaches lot of qualities which helps us in our daily life such as sportsmanship, quality which teaches us to compete without crossing the line of friendship. Regard your opponent as your competitor irrespective of friend or enemy. Sometimes in life when we are competing for same post we start feeling jealous of each other and try to out do them in every possible ways we can and thus causing rift between us which lead to the breaking of relationship, we used to have earlier. Games teaches us to keep personal equation separate from the professional life. Moreover, it teaches us to lose gracefully, shame associated with lose stops many people from competing in life, games erases that fear.
In conclusion, games are not about winning, they are about competing and conducting ourself in the best possible way. Respect for the game should be the top priority than win, only then the objective of games can be achieved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'rests'?
Suggestion: rests
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81016042781 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54088504829 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553475935829 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2639327221 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.823529412 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25049366409 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905126461988 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078427668469 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165585712625 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901849300937 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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