Developed countries should help developing or under developed nations on humanitarian grounds , and moreover it can be a two way street as it can be beneficial for developed nations too both socially as well as economically ,although this help should not be in the form of direct monetary benefits as they can be misused . In this essay reasons and advantages of providing assistance by developed countries in form of food and education will be discussed.
Due to technological advancements the metaphorical tunnel of distance between different nations has dissolved ,and we are all inhabitants of this global village known as earth . Out of compassion prosperous nations should share some part of their money in form of supplies or by running educational campaigns or by providing medical facilities . Although directly loaning money can be mis-used and might not reach to the less fortunate and results in making situation more deplorable .This assistance can be governed by an unbiased international organisation such as UNICEF or WHO .to exemplify this model ,i would state an example of UNICEF which is running by funding of wealthier nations and is helping running various educational programs and providing medical care in poorer nations such as Kenya.
Furthermore such assistance can be be beneficial for developed countries too as it can generate financial revenues in some or other form and can make social relations more cordial. To give a concrete example of this kind of situation , let us take an example of USA's Funding to reform educational system for women in Pakistan and in return of which Pakistan has given duty free transportation access to USA for its export to neighboring countries which obviously has a monetary gain for USA in return of its financial aid
To sum up with , it is a moral obligation of developed nations to provide aid to developing or under-developed nations in one form or other ,which is in turn beneficial to donor country too itself financially as well as
socially
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13373860182 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03904934075 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522796352584 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.968651585 49.4020404114 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.285714286 106.682146367 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 20.7667163134 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228773144802 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120010367033 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626249453358 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114556752709 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093559238535 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.0946893788 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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