Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Should Poor country sought help to wealthy country for food and Education:
In the Globalised world, every country seeks the help of others.
Reasons may be defence, economy, Resource etc, and to achieve that, they have been committed to helping them.
So here it's good to "Share and Care".
Poor countries play a significant role for border security of a rich country.
Nepal and Tibet are a small country, their GDP is nominal, still getting help from the neighbouring country.
Nowadays country cannot keep isolate itself, each country's economy
and people are related to each other, people have been migrating from their country for a better lifestyle.
So the development of each country contributes to the development of others.
So for overall growth, richer should uplift the economy of poorer by providing either education or through other means.
This kind of tendency brings fruitful relation in between country and people.
In return, poor country accepts their trade agreement and allow them a way to enter in a big market where they can sell their product and earn the profit.
But another country can not help you up to 100 percents, Government should also take initiatives to uplift their economy by full filling their basic needs.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'kind of']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283898305085 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.131355932203 0.155533422707 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0762711864407 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0296610169492 0.0501214627716 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0550847457627 0.0437548338989 126% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0932203389831 0.122226691241 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0381355932203 0.0403226058552 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50925236121 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0381355932203 0.0326793684256 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0847457627119 0.0861772015684 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0296610169492 0.021408717616 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00423728813559 0.011925033212 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1263.0 1933.35771543 65% => OK
No of words: 205.0 316.048096192 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16097560976 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20517956788 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414634146341 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317073170732 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156097560976 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0926829268293 0.137316102897 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50925236121 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.037074148 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.56093040696 113% => OK
Word variations: 64.8335584745 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6363636364 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2474666235 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.818181818 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.814263465372 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38877755511 296% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.3436807095 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.92156862745 1.69124875643 114% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287809767404 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0940656913575 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0606699300852 0.0668466124924 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 3.07920464807e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1237478114 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558208746579 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0887973412087 0.324371583561 27% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0528572946658 0.0638462369009 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113946643879 0.228012699653 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576561188342 0.058150111329 99% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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