Should young children be encouraged to follow a strict set of rules based on culture and tradition or should they be allowed to behave freely?
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Since ages, there are divided opinions in different cultures regarding the ways to bring up children. Some always back the strict and religious set of rules whereas others always defend freedom from such rules and advocate giving a free rein to children. It seems that the time has now come that we should step out of traditional boundaries.
Strict sets of rules often kill creativity and inhibit individual development. We all are different and we come in this world with different abilities. Now, if similar cultural or religious rules apply to all, it is discouraging indeed. In addition, such compulsion often forces people to rebel against the set up. Those who rebel may reach great heights in their lives like Jesus Christ, Gautam Budha, Swami Vivekanand, Salman Rushdie and so on. Vice versa, those who cannot break free against the confinements of stringent set of religious and cultural protocols of behaviour often get repressed and live a doomed life.
On the other hand, freedom gives birth to creativity. It also promotes faster individual growth and, contrary to most who believe that freedom makes people irresponsible. I think liberty can inculcate virtues of responsibility at a faster pace in our minds. However, a minute proportion of people may misuse the freedom for negative purposes but they cannot be used as example to limit opportunities for whole a lot of other people.
Finally, I agree that freedom gives more opportunity to grow in life. Provided children are prevented from hurting anyone, they should be given as much freedom as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, regarding, so, whereas, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11240310078 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69722051336 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.918288151 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199386195729 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060713683547 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542949089221 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124477740281 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630470886892 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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