It is considered by many that seniors' opinion should be followed by youth, whereas a school of thoughts opine that it has become common that juveniles argue with their grandparents. I personally believe that adolescents should consult old masses and move on their footsteps in certain cases, and intend to discuas both viewpoints in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, teenagers would not go astray, if they prefer to take advice from old masses while taking important decisions. Thereason being, young individuals due to less exposure of life lack maturity, whereas old people can analyse pros and cons of a particular task instantly. For instance, with the help of aged people children after 18 become able to choose course of their interest, otherwise majority of them possess herd mentality these days, which may lead to have detrimental effects on them. Apart from this, in modern time young people have been suffering from lack of patience, and thus solely elderly people's teachings can inculcate such values in them. It is undeniable that youngsters often try to give up on small failures but experienced persons' real life examples can make them enable to understand failure is a stepping stone to success.To illustrate, if children come to know that their grandfathers became successful businessman or professionals after frequent trials and downfalls in their life, they will get motivated and patient and will not drop their studies when remain unsuccessful.
On the contrary, teenagers can raise their voice against orthodox thinking of elderly people since some of them still believe that girls should be confined in the four walls of home, argument against this is justifiable as per the conditions of today's era. Nowadays, certain parts of the world have been trying to create an egalitarian society, wher women have equal right to that of men as they are studying in the same colleges as well as doing the same quality jobs that of males. Consequently, challenging old persons with stereotype thoughts is justifiable which in turn help young children to face the competitive globe. Moreover, sometimes grandparents try to impose strict discipline on their grandchildren including stress on wearing traditional clothes not watching movies which is a trend in the contemporary world. Eventually, children above 18 would challenge in order to compete their agemates.
In conclusion, although some of the gray people still want to let their grandchildren follow bygone era customs, I strongly feel that one must move on their footsteps particularly in sensitive situations,for they have enrich experience of life.
- In recent times young adults are spending less time with your families and more time with friends why this has occurred do you think parents should force children to spend time at home? 73
- A country's future depends on its young people.Tgerefore,it is argue tgat government should invest heavily in its youth.Do you agree or disagree. 56
- Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in the countries police aur military forces Army while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of job Discuss both views and give your opinion 95
- people naturally resist making changes in their lives What kind of problems of problems can this cause Whats solutions you can suggest 89
- Some parents and teachers believe that children s behaviour should be strictly controlled while others think that children should be allowed to grow up in their own way Discuss both views and give your own opinion 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'seniors'' or 'senior's'?
Suggestion: seniors'; senior's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31100478469 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84390096801 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61961722488 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6587301565 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.769230769 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1538461538 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147771506506 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521118961321 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405370847686 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871011724199 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251215278326 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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