Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In my view following elder people's is a good idea to a moderate level because they have seen quite a lot in their life so they predict things faster than what new generation might think. It's not wrong in understanding their thoughts and analyze them in a positive way instead of not considering or ignoring them. They know many natural healing techniques which are replaced by too much of unnecessary medication which can cause serious side effects in few cases.
For example last year one of my friend was severely injured when he met with a serious accident, doctor's treated him with their own methodologies by using a lot of painkillers and high doses of antibiotics for a speedy recovery. It was good until some point of time after his recovery. Later it leaded to another Inflammatory disease. Then, one of my old uncle who is in his sixty's helped him out by giving some natural therapy which helped him a lot by reducing the swelling and as well as helped to recovery mentally.
Of course like mirror has two sides, there may be few drawbacks while following them by keeping your thoughts aside. Older generation might always believe only in a set of options which are not enough to stand attentively in this fast paced world. They always tend to propose to stay with their families work together. But in this modern era everyone has their creative or artistic thoughts which cannot be applied when they got stuck to their elderly decisions, It's better that everyone follow's their own dreams. For example one of my friends grand father forced him a lot to stay in his home town explaining him about risky free life. But he didn't follow those orthodox culture and left to London for his higher studies which took him to a level of establishing his own company later his education.
To concolude, Following them in few cases will be very useful but following them blindly is a bad decision because younger generation have few world-changing thoughts which cannot be suppressed because of their older generation's choice. Ignoring them also might lead to serious devastating situation. So need to carefully judge as per the situations and take better actions accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Suggestion: didn't
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Message: Did you mean 'this orthodox' or 'those orthodoxes'?
Suggestion: this orthodox; those orthodoxes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, of course, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86863270777 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59973454381 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587131367292 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4622942053 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118977278082 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349980572363 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282562555954 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719395881224 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131293638615 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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