Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Smoking as has been scientifically proven can have a devastating effect on the health of the human being. As a result, people believe that smoking should be banned in public places. Although there are arguments on both the side however I staunchly agree that smoking should be completely banned as it has strong ramifications on the health of individuals and near ones.
To elucidate opponents of the ban argue that passive smokers make a choice when they go near smoking zones where smoking is allowed. If they prefer not to smoke then they need not to go to places where smoking is permitted. Additionally, they also argue that a ban would possibly drive bars and clubs out of business as smokers would not prefer to go there. Furthermore, the most common argument is that smoking is not against the law hence it an individual’s choice to smoke or not.
Secondly, there are more convincing arguments in favour of the ban. Firstly cigarette has large amounts of carcinogenic compounds which can cause serious health issues like respiratory problems and cancer to not only to the smoker but nearby people too. Anyone nearby can develop cancers of lung, mouth and respiratory problems, therefore, it would not be fair to impose this upon another person. In any case, people health is more important than businesses as pubs and clubs could adapt to a ban by allowing designated smoking areas.
To conclude it can be seen from the above arguments that smoking causes health problems hence, in my opinion, it should be completely banned from public places which will further help in improving the health of thousands of individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...smoking zones where smoking is allowed. If they prefer not to smoke then they need...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'go'?
Suggestion: go
... prefer not to smoke then they need not to go to places where smoking is permitted. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as a result, in any case, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98181818182 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72876080615 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1212236919 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29358621393 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117340600203 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761793216122 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17858461202 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629371621593 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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