with the development of technology, the world has witnessed a lot of improvement. One such important is solar energy which has influenced some aspects of our human life. Many people excite about a new source of energy, yet a few people believe that there are hidden difficulties for solar energy to become a source of household energy. A careful analysis shows that solar energy has both merits and demerits.
People who advocate the importance of solar energy, often present the idea that energy from the sun is totally free. Moreover, solar energy is also environmentally friendly where humans can receive energy without any emission into the environment. Besides, compared to many other power plants such as heat and nuclear generators; solar energy is safe and sustainable. These reasons make this new type of energy surpassing any other existing sources of energy.
On the flip side, the hidden risks of solar energy can not be wished away or overlooked. One can safely state that a solar panel is just similar to any other piece of technology. It needs frequent maintenance. Without a careful treat, it would result in some malfunctions and the solar panel may no longer operate well. Not to mention, the cost for a solar panel as well as a battery is considerably high, meanwhile, the collected energy per day is just enough to heat some water or light a few bulbs.
To recapitulate, there are many advantages of solar energy, however, its risks could overwhelm its benefits. Therefore, personally, people should seek for solutions to overcome its disadvantage before bringing it into use.
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including uses for food and researchDisc 78
- Most people accept that we now live in globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development 89
- Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of solar energy 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
with the development of technology, the worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06037735849 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74991569177 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3656456026 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369796118529 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121342719122 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696408257362 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219029662038 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964316182516 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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