To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel.
What is your opinion on the above assumption?
Global warming is becoming the biggest threat throughout the world. One of the factors for this effect is the high carbon emission of fuel. There are many other ways to solve this growing environmental issue than increasing the gasoline price.
Nowadays, people own a vehicle for their convenience than considering to use public transportation or at least using Cycle for short-distance travel. In other words, in an urban city having fifty Million population, sixty-one percentage of people have a Car or a Bike. Strange it might seem, but it is a fact that the contribution of carbon emission by an individual vehicle is high than travel by any shared transportation. Instead, people should consider using public transportation such as Bus, Train, and shared-taxi which has less cause-effect.
In the recent report, Japan has established a variety of train services like mono-rail, bullet train, etc. across the country favoring the public to reach their desired destination without any hassles and also on the interest to save the environment from the serious environmental hazards. Thereby, usage of own vehicle has declined to the deep than any other country. Furthermore, the country has taken various steps, one among them is by offering a “pedal and park scheme” i.e. use the cycle at a small amount to commute from home to the nearest railway station. As a result, the interest in buying an own vehicle has been cut-down.
Increasing the price of petrol will not be a great idea if the country already has increased in the vehicle counts. That means, it is inevitable to buy petrol with a few hikes to usage the luxury expensive car. To make it in simple words, a person who has bought a costly Lamborgini car cannot stop him to use just because of fuel rate variation. Despite, spreading awareness to the people to bring interest to save the environment
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 450, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...us steps, one among them is by offering a 'pedal and park scheme' i.e. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, at least, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05448717949 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88174893192 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.664954226 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110969802512 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393791284351 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732083470055 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899472309115 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969208860159 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.