Teenage is the most sensitive age in the life of a human being; it can be both constructive and destructive and is highly dependent on how parents and teachers deal with children in this age. Restrictions in this age are a must but should not be to an extent where a child feels suffocated and angry which can be destructive for the future of the child. I do not agree with the curfew or any other forced rules imposed on teenagers. This essay will highlight how these forced rules can be avoided and still have a safe and better future for the kids.
To begin with why such curfews are imposed, the main reason in my opinion is to protect teenagers from getting into drugs and substances at this age which can be troublesome. Another reason could be the crimes against teenagers and the rising trends of those crimes nowadays.
Now let us discuss if imposing a curfew or forcing some rules will actually help with the drug problem or rather will worsen the situation. In my opinion if a teenager is forced not to do certain things without explaining the merits and demerits of the same will never give desired results. Rather than making strict rules parents and teachers should clearly communicate and take session on how these substances can ruin one’s life. Coming to the another issue of rise in criminal activities against teenagers the more apt solution is to strengthen the law and order and educating children with self defense techniques rather than restricting kids from venturing out and exploring their life.
In conclusion, teenagers are the future of any country and are wise enough to decide what is good for them and what is not, provided with proper guidance and support.
- In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent Why do you think this is and what can be done about it 80
- People are surrounded by advertising which has increasing effect on our lives Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory ob or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your own opinion Write at least 250 words 73
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 56
- In some area of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult What is your opinion on this 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'drugs'' or 'drug's'?
Suggestion: drugs'; drug's
... some rules will actually help with the drugs problem or rather will worsen the situa...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...em or rather will worsen the situation. According to me if a teenager is forced not to do certa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, still, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79124579125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49481090324 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8313308984 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.363636364 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171794962794 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065469524469 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364932237175 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102233760814 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293480991523 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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