It is observed, in many parts of the US, adolescents are under the ban, according to which they are prohibited from certain areas after a particular hour at night until an adult accompany them. In my opinion, it is essential to ensure the safety of juveniles and prevent any kind of mishappening to them.
Firstly, most of the criminal activities take part in the night, thieves feel it easy to commence their crime at night. Hence, It is paramount to keep children away from such detrimental situations, otherwise, they could become a victim of any offensive or hazardous activity. If parents stay with their children at late hours, they can guide them and these situations could be prevented. Secondly, juveniles are naive and volatile with their feeling, they are easy targets and could be misled, further they may involve in addiction to drugs and alcohol. Guardians can provide the exact knowledge about the adverse effects of such practice and give them a good piece of advice.
On the other hand, at night, roads are used by heavy loaded trucks for supply, it is very dangerous to walk by the road because of the low vision. Parents can use their driving experience to escort their young ones from one destination to other. Nowadays, we hear a lot of news about child abuse that mostly happens at late hours. According to a non-government organization, around seventy-five percent of rape cases happen at night, out of which thirty percent are related to age between five to eighteen, this number is huge. Adolescents are vulnerable, and they should be protected from such heinous acts.
To conclude, in my opinion, curfews must be imposed in the manner to protect teenagers and parents always accompany whenever their children leave the door at night, it is the best way to avoid any detrimental activity they might become a victim of.
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages. 84
- People are sleeping less than in the past. Why do people do it? What are the effects of this? 89
- You missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what happened. In your letter include:what the appointment wasa apology for missing the appointmenta request to reschedule 73
- You are planning to go abroad for study. You wish to do a part time job. Ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to him and in your letter:. Give some details of your study plans. explain why you need a part time job. suggest how your f 73
- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92012779553 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63826971452 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600638977636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6583005306 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227578898103 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723102322767 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718844803596 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149616037739 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558372851944 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.