In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
what is your opinion about this.
In some areas of USA there is a restriction for teenagers to come out of the home after a specific time in the night without the supervision of any adult. This is a good step by the government and justifiable.
Teenagers and kids cannot differentiate in good and bad people and drug mafia take advantage of this as they work in the night. They lore the kids and teenagers and lead them to the drug. Initially they give them drugs free of cost to make them addicted and later on they take advantage and also ask them to work for them. If someone become addicted to the drug he will do everything for drug.
It is very important for parents to keep an eye on their kid’s activities and guide them if they notice anything bad. Apart from the drug mafia a lot of bad people come out at night to look for the victim. These animal nature people do not care about the circumstance that will happen after their act. This can destroy the life of the kids and teenagers.
It is very important that if it is necessary for teenager or kids to go out at night any parent or guardian must accompany them. In the present of any adult there is least chances that they can misguide them.
Conclusion, In my view to impose curfew at night time for kids and teenager, which not allow them to come out of home alone is a good decision from the government to protect young generation from bad people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: is the least
...them. In the present of any adult there is least chances that they can misguide them. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, apart from, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43629343629 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37542438025 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494208494208 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6756468776 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3846153846 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222228233334 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085775103049 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596752385183 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144354988574 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511832136753 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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