In certain area of the United States, under aged people are not allowed to roam around freely without accompany of an adult in particular hours at night. From my point of view I strongly agree with the topic for some aspects.
Juvenile crime is the most important problem in some countries like USA. Below sixteen groups may easily get into crime as such, extortion, drug dealing, rape and any other subversive activities as they have nominal punishment for crimes. The criminals use the youth as their stake holder of crimes . Likewise, children are adventurous they love to break the law. Most of the occurrences are committed at night. That is why their movement should be controlled for their safety and security. By the same token, teenagers have neither school nor job at night except staying at home.
On the other hand, some people argued crimes are not only visible at night but also seen during the daylight. So curfew for some specific hours is not a god idea. Beside this, teens may have a medical emergency in anytime. They may have no adult at home in that crucial moments. Prohibition at night may invite an obvious accident. Finally, Curfew for the teenagers will bring negative impact on child psychology. This type of restriction dishonors the child.
To conclude, limitation of the children’s roaming will prevent them from any approach of crime. I believe the system will protect them until they will able to protect themselves. Government should continue the curfew for a golden future of the youth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, likewise, may, so, in particular, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94163424125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48012349679 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645914396887 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7607798757 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8421052632 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5263157895 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22302234057 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632204169751 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523044979905 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131592279871 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665548970679 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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