It is reported that in some parts of the vast land of the USA, teenagers are not permitted to step out of the home after a specific time at nights unless they are with someone who meets the legal age. In my point of view, this program has both its beneficial and unfavorable consequences which all will be discussed further in this essay based on potent facts and valid instances.
Let me first put a light on the plus points this novel scheme has offered to the society of the USA. First and foremost, with this program, teenagers are in no danger of being bullied or being robbed by American criminals in some regions, therefore this program can save their lives. Secondly and importantly, some parts of the USA which are mostly located in poor areas are well-known for their drugs thus, teenagers have this opportunity to be offered or given drugs to try and the bitter happening of addiction can occur for these young, curious generation. Based on these two facts I found this program highly acceptable to follow to guard the teenagers' lives against any inevitable as well as potential dangers.
On the other side, I assume there are some cons related to this Curfew program. In the latest interview the NY Times reporter had with Alex a 13-year old schoolboy, he has been pointed out the sense of freedom has missed by most of my friends and my classmates due to this new rule. Furthermore, he has added we do always worry about the criminals around the neighborhood and most of the times we are stressed out when we hang out with friends out. I totally agree with what Alex has told in his interview since I believe these are common feelings among American teenagers who ought to follow this tough law.
By way of conclusion, although I am totally aware that this new scheme is protecting teenagers, however, I hold this belief that the government of the USA have to tackle this issue by cleaning these areas from criminals not just choose the easiest way of limiting the hours going out.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...rtunity to be offered or given drugs to try and the bitter happening of addiction can o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64507042254 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44278467834 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571830985915 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4007262665 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.909090909 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2727272727 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252318873216 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938508540075 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490587510007 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149725055489 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05104685102 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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