In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
Recent times, curfew executed in several areas of the US. Due to this law, teenagers should stay at home at night especially after half past six. Still, if they need to go out than adult or parents should go with them. This essay will discuss my opinion on the curfew implementation by providing convincing examples.
Teenagers can be easily influenced by wrongdoers. This the stage where they are open-minded and will show their fearless character. This is one of the reasons why during tough situations or period of violence the government imposed this act to stay safe and to maintain peace. For instance, the terror attack in Mumbai Taj Hotel during 2007 executed by teenagers with the age group of 17 to 19. To prove that, Standford University had done many surveys on the involvement of teenagers in a violent act. The result shows that teenagers from poor countries are used as a weapon for illegal activities since they are easy to convince and approach.
The government have taken this hard decision for the welfare of young people. It is a crucial period where they need guidance from the schools and parents. Practically a few states in the US where many offences performed by teenagers over the years. This is due to improper guidance from their parents where the young person got isolated and trapped by wrong motivators. Recently awareness video telecasts by local NGO in the state Florida which described the importance of curfew made a big impact on young persons, this video should be prompted particularly the affected states in the US.
To conclude, certain measures taken by the administration is for the betterment of living. Teenagers are not banned completely to go out whereas they can with the guidance of their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95593220339 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.662055287 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6996240247 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19795323943 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599365341548 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502510880384 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120102752081 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585772052269 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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