Some argue that film and television are a waste of time, because they do not have a direct connection with people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement in technology and entertainment industry, television and movies have become an inevitable part of our lives. The film and television industry are perceived to be unrealistic and far from reality having no direct connection with our daily lives. Though, some people believe that watching films and televisions is a wasteful and unproductive habit, I strongly believe that they are a great source of enhancing our knowledge and play a pivotal role in shaping our opinion on worldly affairs.
Several individuals have an opinion that movies and television shows depict unusual and flamboyant appearances which attract young minds. Children become addicted to watching films and follow the characters shown in movies religiously. Additionally, advertisements and promotional events of organisation target younger generation hence persuading them to purchase the product and increase their sales. Moreover, the news and media exhibit false and biased information about the people’s lives thus negatively influence the minds of individuals. To elucidate, movies based on superhero characters like batman and superman take children into a fantasy world which is far from reality.
Despite of the few drawbacks of films and televisions, the idea that they are useless and unfruitful is completely preposterous. Cinema and televisions help increase the awareness of people about the day to day affairs. Moreover, there are many art movies which increases the consciousness of people about the conditions of poor’s and women in the society. Furthermore, films help in enhancing the knowledge of people about the history and culture of their country. To illustrate, a movie has been made based on Nirbhaya Case to show the real-life instances and sufferance of a young women raped along with the hardships of her family members in providing her justice which helps in creating awareness among people
To conclude, I vehemently agree that television and cinema is a productive activity which helps in providing a plethora of information to people which enlarge their understanding and erudition about the current affairs and society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...ife instances and sufferance of a young women raped along with the hardships of her f...
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on about the current affairs and society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56838905775 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03571190812 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547112462006 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2411596216 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.923076923 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202747919159 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071596958596 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542758344003 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118540009583 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720960120883 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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