Some believe that advances in technology are increasing the gap between rich and poor while others
think the opposite is happening.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
People have different opinions whether the technological progress is contributing to widening the
gap between affluent and poverty-stricken or not. Although some believe that it has deepen the
divide, I personally opine that technology has offered more earning opportunities to economically
weak section to improve their living conditions.
On the one hand, there are those who support the idea that as technology is progressing, rich is
becoming richer whereas poor is being poorer. In other words, impoverished class is likely to lose
their jobs because of advancements in technology. Automation may cause loss of many unskilled
labours in household as well as factories. At household level, countless families, for instance,
probably favour the use of automatic machines, such as dishwasher, washing machine, and vacuum
cleaner as opposed to employing a maid to get the household chores done. They find these
technology-driven gadgets cost-effective in the long-run which can be conveniently used at the
disposal of user whereas one has to be dependent in case of a maid. Therefore, it is apparent why
they find the gap between the two classes, rich and poor, is increasing.
Despite the above arguments, I firmly believe that technological improvements have been creating
many earning opportunities for underprivileged. Indeed, not all work can be completed by a
machine no matter how advanced it is. People who are at work most of the time, need helpers to
operate these modern gadgets as these cannot function on their own. Job loss due to progress in
technology is a short-sighted view. As a result of improvement in technology, applications like Ola
and Uber has made it possible for drivers to serve to a greater customer base and therefore have
bright prospects to be economically sound. Needless to say, this could have been possible only
because of progression in technology.
In conclusion, some might argue that technology is giving rise to job loss resulting into increasing
the divide between rich and poor while I strongly believe that non only technology is creating
abundant job opportunities which were never available in past but also making poor more
financially strengthened
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42693409742 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20090011232 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598853868195 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7053492551 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.266666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213832429291 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622773227025 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635965827255 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509946811694 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659194019799 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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