Some believe that charitable organizations should help people no matter where they live. Others argue that charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As the number of Mishappenings either natural or intentional are showing up more and more charitable Agencies are being established for helping the sufferers. however.difference amongst the people is accentuating on the argument that whether these volunteer organisations extend their helping hands to every part of the world or they should restrict their free services to their domestic Nation only.prior to reaching at any conclusion I will juxtapose both the views
On the one hand financial reserves of these organisations utterly Limited and entirely dependent on benevolent donations which are not always made. considering these budgetary constraints and other expenses increasing from travel to other countries charitable organisations must not take this initiative unless they have significant reserves of essential commodities, like food and medicines as well as money. although this approach would flourish better relationship between Donor and recipient Nation but its feasibility is supported by low budget of charitable organisation. this is best example fired by recent case of Africa when a naive volunteering Organisation was declared bankrupt attempted a rescue operation in America an intense scrutiny has discovered that this situation would have been ameliorated if agency had sufficient money with them. therefore helping less fortunate people in other countries is not only expensive but risky for agency itself
On the other hand investing their time and resources in their home country would help them reaping numerous benefits. firstly being actively supporting poor people in on Nation would uplift people's life standard and there is no doubt in it that it requires comparatively less money than helping people overseas. in addition to this this will save organisation from going astray sense time is an important factor providing help in right time is rather the dire need then reaching at needed people too late. a government operated form saved millions of lives during coronavirus pandemic only because they were able to reach to the needy people back in time and their leader has said that they operate only in their hometown for making better use of resources.
In my opinion helping people in other Nations is only good if two conditions are satisfied. first agency has adequate funds and other resources. second in your own Nation everyone is Opulent and satisfied. if not then helping indigenous people is best to use resources and time optimally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43927648579 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8950164522 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602067183463 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.320787731 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.923076923 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7692307692 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207581029277 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751792472553 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493245558899 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129717354619 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271523770026 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.