ou would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Mr Ben,
I have recently heard about the seminar which your company is organizing on 9th of the september,2020. I am writing this letter to enquire about a few details of this event. I am interested to attend this seminar as it will be focused on the potential of geothermal energy.
To introduce meself a little, My name is Den and i am working as senior engineer in a leading company in India, Being an employee of Energy managing company, it will be a great opportunity, if i could participate in this particular event.
As i will have to travel to Thailand to attend this seminar on geothernal energy so, i have a few things in my mind to ask before i make any decision regarding participation. It would be helpful for me if you could provide me some information about the date of starting and duration of the event. It would be much better to know the schedule of this event in advance. You can E- mail me to provide this information as soon as possible. Moreover i will be highly grateful to know about any accomodation facility and its charges if any.
looking for your prompt reply
yours sincerely
Den
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'september 2020'.
Suggestion: september 2020
...our company is organizing on 9th of the september,2020. I am writing this letter to enquire ab...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uire about a few details of this event. I am interested to attend this seminar as...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...uce meself a little, My name is Den and i am working as senior engineer in a lead...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...any, it will be a great opportunity, if i could participate in this particular ev...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...icipate in this particular event. As i will have to travel to Thailand to atte...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e a few things in my mind to ask before i make any decision regarding participati...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...e this information as soon as possible. Moreover i will be highly grateful to know about...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...formation as soon as possible. Moreover i will be highly grateful to know about a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...ion facility and its charges if any. looking for your prompt reply yours sincerel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59113300493 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80270891587 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.846076923 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150401319416 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583949201018 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278815361381 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827040660054 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396751405403 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.