Some believe the primary purpose of museums is to entertain people, while
others believe their purpose is to educate. Discuss both views and give your
own opinion.
The artefacts preserved in the museum create curiosity in people. Many people argue the prime purpose of this preservation is to entertain the people, whereas others believe this collection is to educate the public. This essay will discuss both views before the declaration of a position.
To begin with, some people entertain when they observe antique pieces. For example, numerous working people can be seen in the museum on holidays. Harvard University researched why employees feel entertained and refreshed in visiting the museum. Indeed, people feel refreshed when their minds are occupied by the subject matter which is other than the content they are usually busy with. This is the conclusion reached by Harvard University why employees received entertainment in visiting the museum.
However, it is noteworthy to mention that the prime purpose of the museum is to disseminate the values to the public that ancient items have. The policy that many governments are charging minimum or free tickets for museum-visitors is to motivate people to visit museums. These visits provide people opportunities to learn the values of things that the museum displays. Meanwhile, the tickets to watch games, movies, clubs comparatively cost a very high amount. This fact supports that museums are for educational purposes.
Although one can be entertained while observing the antique collection of the museum, the main purpose of displays of the museum is to educate the public. Those educational contents which entertain as well are easily perceivable by the public; therefore, I believe learning about the ancient items visiting the museums should be encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44787644788 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80225372332 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563706563707 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1820745342 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30998590438 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972516023003 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600134536743 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18708572315 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531537851122 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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