In my view, smoking is hazardous is to life. These days private as well as public sectors have put restriction on smoking.
In agreement to the above statement smoking causes cough. For example, if we pass by a smoker one tends to start coughing and sometime causes congestion and nausea. Therefore, it is not good for kids also as they are hyper-sensitive to smoke.
In severe cases, for example, in case of chain smokers it is cancerous too. It can cause throat and lung cancer which is life threatening.
In addition to health, it is not good for environment. It causes air pollution. Most importantly, smoking should be strictly banned in private sector as it is every citizens duty to think of society as a whole.
In conclusion, for the betterment of oneself and society smoking should be strictly banned and a lump sum fine should be imposed on the smoker only then can we have a better healthy life. Let's make this world a better place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...banned in private sector as it is every citizens duty to think of society as a whole. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...then can we have a better healthy life. Lets make this world a better place to live ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69411764706 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6775757253 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5094760678 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146014376932 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516262917244 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329303251981 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785991017031 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297386441908 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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