In the present world, all the major cities are experiencing the problem of overcrowding. I feel this is majorly due to two prime reasons, which are job opportunities and urbanization.
Firstly urbanization in the big cities is the major reason behind this influx of people from smaller cities. This means that there in growth in the fields of housing, medical, educational and recreational facilities. These attributes are important and are considered as the basic necessities of life. People have understood that a good quality life can be possible only in such urban areas.
Moreover, this urban growth has created employment opportunities as well. Such opportunities help in enhancing one's personal, mental and professional growth. People tend to rush towards such opportunities as they provide means to earn a quality life. This fuels the pace of life in metropolitan cities which people tend to enjoy. This also helps in mental growth of an individual since they have a sense of achievement in life.
In contrast, to reduce or reverse this flow of population the government agencies should create job openings in smaller cities. People should be provided with basic amenities of life so that the concentration on one city could be reduced. Moreover, the de-congestion of major cities is needed so that resources like food, water and electricity that are must for living can be utilized optimally.
In the end, the administration has to take stringent and promotional measures so the influx can be stopped and reversed to the outflow from majorly populated. This will actually help in the growth of all the smaller cities and will further project the whole country as a prosperous nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...are important and are considered as the basic necessities of life. People have understood that a ...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...l. Such opportunities help in enhancing ones personal, mental and professional growt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, as to, i feel, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96615397805 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2164845637 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873178856396 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299552694126 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340219976978 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052121759891 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267598289366 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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