Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of of wearing uniform?
wearing an uniform has become compulsory at many workplaces.Since every coin has two sides, this topic is also quiet debatable.
There are many benefits of wearing uniform. Firstly, we do not waste time in deciding about the outfit every morning.Since we have to wear same outfit everyday for the office, we can save alot of time than compare to those who have to decide everyday about what to wear while going to work. Secondly, we can save lot of money if we have to wear same uniform to work.For example,my wife usually buys outfit by-weekly for the office.Althought having same uniform does not save alot of money,however having three or four pairs can save money.Thirdly, many companies provide uniform for their employees for marketing purpose.Imagine you have to wear uniform that consist of images of the brands or services you are selling, this is really good idea for marketing at lower cost.Additionally, wearing a uniform shows the identity of the person, there are many examples for this like, a lawyer, doctor, waiter and so on.
wearing same uniform daily could have negative sides as well.First and most important disadvantage is that, wearing same outfit daily can lead person to feel bored at workplace.Unlike others who used to wear new outfits daily and can showoff while taking selfie and posting them on social media, employees having same uniform does not enjoy this pleasure.Secondly,wearing same uniform daily we do not look different from yesterday.Imagine your girlfriend seeing you daily in same outfit in weekdays.
In conclusion, having a uniform is a good idea.marketing could have make easy by the company to allow their employees to wear uniform that have their own brand's images on it.However, I believe,uniform should be wear on alternate day basis, so that every employee can also enjoy wearing different outfit atleast alternate days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1868852459 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1684992128 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.911879523 49.4020404114 407% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.666666667 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8333333333 20.7667163134 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343858430324 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221017996743 0.084324248473 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916909214822 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233768271106 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075465502871 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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