Indeed, the delinquents acts are escalating in the various nations. Some masses are believing that high proportion of cops is a great deal to reduce the problem of offense. I totally disagree to this statement and upcoming subsections cast light on the relevant points of this statement before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
To commence with, there are influx of notions to support my side. The primary one is that government is supposed to establish digital methods to curb the delinquency; such as the CCTV cameras can provide a helping hand to society and the higher authorities can check the recording because CCTV cameras keep an eagle eye on crimes. Apart from this, Police officers are humans, so it is not possible for them to job for long hours without having rest. Consequently, most of the individuals are prone to crime.
Furthermore, these days, majority of people are grappling with unemployment. As a result, masses are following the unscrupulous means, regime must sort out the problem of unemployment that directly control the worse situation of offensive activities. What is more, they are supposed to provide various options of work, especially who are struggling with poverty. For instance, It is surveyed that countries which have adapted technology to cover come such problem, have less rate of criminal activities.
On the other hand, there are some benefits of hiring police officers. First and foremost is that police officers are extremely beneficial because people from cops and they neglect the criminal activities.Besides, individuals can get help from cops anytime and when comes to police officers in surrounding they feel safe.
To conclude, this problem is the matter of grave concern.the government can take help from the digital methods because these days the digital ways are touching the unprecedented heights and it is beneficial to ameliorate criminal issues.
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime To what extent to you agree or disagree 73
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime To what extent to you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ing in the various nations. Some masses are believing that high proportion of cops is a great...
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Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'influxes'?
Suggestion: influxes
...onclusion. To commence with, there are influx of notions to support my side. The prim...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...nd they neglect the criminal activities.Besides, individuals can get help from cops any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, so, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28382838284 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89754692657 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3136909644 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15888194095 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524635148667 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368645818123 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073821912416 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381294395194 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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