Indeed, the delinquents acts are escalating in the multifarious countries. Some masses believing that high proportion of cops is great deal to reduce the crime. I totally disagree to this statement and upcoming paragraphs cast light on the relevant points of this statement before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
To commence with, there are influx of points regarding this statement.The primary point is that the government is supposed to establish digital methods to curb the deliquency such as; the CCTV cameras can provide a helping hand to society and the higher authorities can check the recording because CCTV cameras keep an eagle eyes on streets. Apart from this, Police officers are humans and it is not possible for them to job for long term without taking rest. Resultantly, most of the individuals are prone to the deliquent acts.
Furthermore, these days, majority of people are grappling with unemployment because of this, masses are following the unscruplous ways, government should reduce unemployment which automaticly curb deliquent act. Moreover, they suppose to provide jobs to that masses who are confronting to the poverty. For example, there is less crimal activities in forn countries because they take help from CCTV cameras and robots in the streets..
On the other hand, there are some benefits of hiring police officers. First and foremost is that police officers are extremely beneficial because people from cops and they neglect the criminal activities.Besides, individuals can get help from cops anytime and when comes to police officers in surrounding they feel safe.
To conclude, this problem is the matter of grave concern.the government can take help from the digital methods because these days the digital ways are touching the unprecedented heights and it is beneficial to ameliorate criminal issues.
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime To what extent to you agree or disagree 73
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime To what extent to you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37716262976 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89236102964 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.6325390536 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101913588506 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382269610215 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037590190273 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569257890487 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195925973604 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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