In some countries, children under 16 can not be allowed to leave school by law and get full-time work. Is this a good or a bad thing? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Juveline delinquency is a golden period of learning and overall development of a child. Perhaps, youngsters employment during this glooming age is a worrying challenge for most countries who providing employment opportunities to toddlers, especially at a time of economic instability and social unrest. However, to say this is the largest issue to overlook a range of pressing matters, as we will discuss now.
At first, It is a significant decision implemented by the educational authorities to support child labour. The main reasons for these lead to provide student to firstly glance over their career prospects rather than earning livelihood which is the task of their parents. Furthermore, if children manifest his additional hours on working outside they will not have time left for their study. In other words, their growth will become stagnant in terms of physical and personal growth. It is undeniable that providing choice to earn money will make juveline air-headed,self-independent, notorious and blurt. Therefore, it is the best policy to boycott children from work. There is no doubt that in some countries it is illegal to enforce toddlers to indulge in jobs.
Foremost among these is the perhaps the issue of poverty, whereby juveline is forced to employ themselves with the cause of unbearable expenses of their school fees. Consequently, parents send their children during a vacation to work. Despite the fact, they are too sincere towards this kind of activities and they can be seized anytime if they come in the eyes of the corps. As this is the criminal activity to put children under work. But there is a solution to this situation as the government has made education free for the children in developed counties. Simultaneously, in some poor countries the education is not free but they have made the lower fees for the middle-class families who can't bear the expense of their children.
To conclude, it seems logical to accept that education institutions have taken the pragmatic step towards child's future prospects by providing free services of education and other peculiar facilities to not to abandon the school for work during adolescence age. Howeverse, persistent tends still entrust children to do illegal work under the peer pressur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , self-independent
...earn money will make juveline air-headed,self-independent, notorious and blurt. Therefore, it is ...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... if they come in the eyes of the corps. As this is the criminal activity to put ch...
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Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... fees for the middle-class families who cant bear the expense of their children. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, kind of, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21917808219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04351871894 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578082191781 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0337022788 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.833333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146245339257 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506441332086 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492023759937 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872149553035 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383383988545 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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