The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
In this contemporary settings, technology has changed the path of life. With its invention of mobile phone it has extremely influenced the millennials towards the digital era. The supreme advantage of this trend is mainly emphasise on the online global trade, emails and web shopping from all over the world. Whilst, the main drawbacks are the eye diseases, social account victims and cyber crime.
Elucidating in details, usage of mobile phones have an enormous rise in last couple of years. In the bygone days, it was limited to texting and calling purpose. Currently, the cell phones have become necessity for myriad usage. Firstly, it has become our craze to buy a branded phones to outcast to the society for fame and to become a trendy and stylish. Secondly, it is vital source of communicating with each others. Most of the popular time is invested on cell phones for talking to someone far away.Thirdly, the exorbitant rate of phone usage is for the business purpose. Entrepreneurs run their applications on palystores and website portals to extend their trade. Likewise, it is used by the youngster for the online shopping and education. Generally, the business is smoothly run mainly via provide all access on the mobile phone such as interbanking, paying bills, hotstar, Hudson bay brand online store and so on.
On the other hand, the main drawbacks are the less consciousness regarding the health by constant mobile users. As prolonged hours are manifested on efficiently using the cell phone for their benefits but side effects will be seen in near future. Mobile phones generate radiations, causes weak eyesight, and other high alarmed health illness which are harmful for them. Consequently, millions of the people have social accounts and excessive time is devoted on using social media which has devastating effect on their personal life. As a result , leakage of privacy due to various cyber hackers. It is proved according to the Times, that every year there are suicides due to social media crimes. Lastly , these harmful effects causing a innocents one's life into danger against which pragmatic approach should be taken by the government.
To pen down, apart from the most obvious benefits of digital phones in making the life like a piece of cake and convenient. With the number of play store application, Google maps,online shopping and interacting globally via various accounts made everything available under one click in a mini box set. The demerits outweighs the disadvantages with ths number of reasons as it is a blessing in disguise which cause to the proximity of danger of life with its overusage and putting constant time on taking benefits of things via internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, apart from, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0993227991 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68766675422 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562076749436 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1849672787 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2173913043 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2608695652 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82608695652 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167059995479 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442107147236 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321830436034 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093129008246 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367865770737 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.