In some countries, disabled people face a lot of troubles to access public and private facilities. What solutions do you have to help such people? Discuss
In the era of modernization, its imperative to have facilities and infrastructure for the specially challenged. The govt should be more sensitive to the needs of the disabled. While one gets to see such access and arrangements for them at metros and airports, there is a lot which needs to be implemented by civic authorities in a city. This article endorses solutions for the disable in public and private facilities.
When you see discrimination against the specially challenged individuals rampant in our society, in private and public companies, one gets a feeling why the govt is not doing enough for them, its not just the physically disabled or the blind there are other who are mentally challenged or may have hearing or walking impairments. Often, they are neglected by the society also the govt.
There needs to be concrete plans and solutions chalked out for such under privileged. Govt, should make arrangements for them in public transit system, as well as public places and buildings. Physically challenged corridors, special needs arrangements in buildings, wheelchair access in public urinals should be made mandatory in urban planning projects.
The government should provide benefits to companies who hire disabled employees, there needs to be special tax exemptions for them to buy necessary support machines like hearing aid, wheel chairs or a disable friendly vehicle. Nations like US and UK walk the extra mile in terms of taking care of their citizens who have special needs, from bus stops to railway stations, malls and public places they have all the amenities from designated pathways, to wheelchair accessibility and step markers for the blind. Such provisions and facilities ensure wellbeing to the underprivileged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30935251799 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00257812379 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.8157371807 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168797886936 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664576737868 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566554090979 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109220882703 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250995386096 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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