In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, people are constantly focusing on increasing their salary and raising their quality of living. It is commonly believed that a person who can earn a good salary is an asset to the country whereas, there are others who are of a different opinion and think that the higher authority should limit the amount of money earned. In my opinion, there should be no limit to what a person can earn, as it is the hard work and the dedication which is paying him. This essay will discuss both the opinions.
Firstly, everyone grows with an aim to achieve something extraordinary in their life. Indeed, there is no limitation to ones’ thinking and imagination. Although there are many shortcuts to earn money, however, there are some who love challenges and dedicate themselves to attain heights. Thus, these people deserve to earn more as they have come a long way and sacrificed their comforts to meet their goal. Lastly, it is intuitively obvious that a person who earns more will spend more. Most importantly, taxes paid by him will also be more. Thus, it will lead to the growth of the economy. For instance, a recent study done by some experienced economists showed that 40% of the economy depends on the taxpayers’ contribution.
On the other hand, a few think that the government should keep an eye on the amount of salary or wage a person earns. Due to the fact that a person who earns money do not value it. Also, the crime rate can increase as people envy others and end up indulging in criminal activities. In addition to this, the huge difference in the wages creates an inequality in the professional end. However, in my point of view, the amount of money to be paid should depend on the type of skills involved. To illustrate an example, the skill which a doctor possess is not easy to acquire, it requires several years of practice and dedication. Thus, this profession deserves a higher salary.
To conclude, after analyzing all the aspect of the given argument it is evident that the salary should depend on the ability of a person. According to me, if one deserves a higher salary, then he should be paid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...Thus, these people deserve to earn more as they have come a long way and sacrifice...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ould depend on the ability of a person. According to me, if one deserves a higher salary, then ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6346221103 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.173489002 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1904761905 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271757355292 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660907324049 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605858006634 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157614549253 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866198551399 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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