In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
IT is true that government authorities provide some facilities in mega cities to make motivations among different industries and businesses to move to the regions out of the cities. While the are some negative effects for this issue, I believe that the advantages by far outweigh the disadvantages.
There are various reasons why I would argue that this is a positive trend which brings a few advantages for the residents of metropolitan cities. Firstly, the most important reason for air pollution in big cities are the greenhouse gases, exhaust from cars and factories that contaminate the air, so by transmitting factories and bussinesses to the suborban areas the amount af air pollution will be reduced. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that USA could diminish the air pollution in some states by introducing a law which obligates factory owners to move to new areas, besides they would benefit the less tax policy. THis trend decresed the air pollution almost 30% in 2015. Secondly, this will provide more job opportunities and income for the local people of this suborben areas. A particular salient example of this is Mexico that boost the economy of regions next to big cities up to 15%.
On the other hand, there are some strong arguments against the idea of moving factories and businesses to the regions outside the mega cities. It is believed that workforce have to spend more time commuting to their work and consequently they spend less time with their families and it imposes greater expenditures on them. Furthermore, in case of emergencies the public services such as hospitals and banks are not easily accessible. Moreover, finding professional employees is much more difficult since they prefer not to work in distant areas
To conclude, although there are some detrimental effects of transfering various businesses to the areas outside of cities, the benefits such as traffic congestion and air pollution improvements would outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19033232628 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87070115942 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558912386707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.3548985577 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.166666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298967258985 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107095532421 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794320889881 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189419179176 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710749673184 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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