In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and business to move to regional areas outside the big cities.
Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
In the past half century,there have been enormous growth in factories, which has resulted in considerable change in industry culture in terms of shifting industrial zones towards the suburbs.However , some people oppose it. This essay will express its benefits eclipsing its few drawbacks as I personally encourage the industrial revolution.
To commence with ,proponents advocate that establishing factories and offices at rural places will be comprised with ample of needful space with availability of optimum resources at very affordable cost. To illustrate, reduced transportation cost due to availability of raw materials in vicinity .plus, cheap labour can be employed from the local areas works like icing on the cake ,this trend eventually profits the surrounding people owing to burgeoning transportation due to factories and getting employed in the respective company.
Although, one compelling reason in lack of the support of moving factories is industrial toxic fumes and wastage ,that give rise to the air and water pollution. But ,some environmentalist suggest to rectify this contamination can be mitigated or reduced by using latest filtration devices .Because developing area will outrightly attain the government subsidies such aa electricity and water.
Furthermore, I opine in favour of development . such revolutionary step to shift companies and factories to countryside areas will give rise to education and job opportunities and over all development of the remote areas.
In the end, after analysing above arguments, this essay overshadow demerits in concern of substantial growth of rural places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7479338843 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26841371589 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685950413223 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6594199474 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.555555556 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100331439215 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376078374749 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326809261245 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483357489279 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436903004718 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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