Some countries have introduced a law to limit working hours for employees. Why is this law introduced? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In the present era, due to high competitiveness, the number of hours per day considerably gone up. In my opinion, it is advantageous for employees. in upcoming paragraphs, I would discuss the reasons why this law is being placed, and pros and cons of it.
There are numerous reasons why this law is passed. To begin with, in the present scenario, people are made to to sit for a longer time, from 9am to 7 pm, by their employers, and they are just getting paid for 8 hours. So, this law would certainly save them from exploitation. in addition to that, people are forgetting to draw a line between work and family they became workaholicS to satisfy their desires, and they have less time to devote their family. This regulation has brought in due to well-being of everyone and provide them their rights.
This law comes in with several benefits. Employees would not have work, out of compulsion, for longer hours and so, they would have time to devote to their family. As a result, relationship would get better and lead to happier life. Also, when the number of hours would be fixed, they would be able to spend time on some physical exercise and leisure activities. therefore, they would stay healthy both physically and mentally. Because the individual would not stay in office for more than 8 hours, Employers would have to hire some workers, to complete their projects. Thus, it would aid to lessen the problem of unemployment. moreover, it has been proved that having a limit on working hours enhances their productivity and output.
Summing up, this law has been introduced to protect the rights of the employees, and it is very beneficial for individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79861111111 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68609100303 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2052840365 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2941176471 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242652453187 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842129011002 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685178389985 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159019220008 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307077390387 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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