In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food
To what to extent do you agree or disagree.
Some people eat too much fast food, consequently it leads to different kind of illness in some countries. Nowadays, this countries such as Britain, USA and Malaysia are growing about to eat too more fast food by most people. Because some people think fast foods are cheaper and comfortable to eat than other fresh green foods. This kind of nutrition save people's time. Therefore, they always eat this type of food. Moreover this foods are to prepare very easy. However, people do not think consequence and their health. Hence, various type of illness, especially fatness. This is global problem in the worldwide. Besides there are various heavy diseases for example, blood flow, heart problems, diabetes mellitus and so on. Some people think their budget to buy eating consequently they compel to buy fast food. But when they become ill, they may be spend more than buying fast food. They should spend their money buying healthy foods instead that. Government should to impose the tax different kind of ways. For instance, someone eat too much fast food, government should be take half of their salary per person of family when they may be work somewhere. Besides, some nutrition cafes should organize different type of healthy foods or drinking such as for to be health cocktail, green salads and so on. Accordingly people will learn healthy life.In my opinion, every people should take care their lifestyle. Some people might be hate from the government for imposing taxes. This is their task. So they think our health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99212598425 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30027750121 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9002371266 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349360312797 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116637571319 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685953530657 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349360312797 0.151304729494 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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