In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
Do you agree or disagree?
It has often been argued that in some countries people are now more inclined towards readymade food leading to health disorder. To avoid citizens, consuming unhealthy diet, it has now became obligatory to charge more tax on these kind of food items. To be very precise, I strongly agree with this opinion and think whatever we eat leads to our good or bad health and levying tax on eatables will restrict us to eat food like breads and buns.
To begin with, it has commonly been noticed that due to busy lifestyle, family has opted to eat junk food as it does not take more time to cook. Not only elders are giving the priority to these food but also kids love to eat burgers and pizzas. As a result of it, children are becoming obese at very young age. Unknowingly, when adults eat food like noodles, it does not get digested easily and leads to stomach ailment. For example, a study done in oxford university states that 50%youngsters of United States of America are suffering from obesity in comparison to Indian teenagers. Therefore, government should not take second thought for those food items that makes people sick instead a lucrative amount should be charged.
Furthermore, it has been seen that those who were in early eighties were not as sick as people today. With the advancement of technology, we are moving to more developed stage, unfortunately neglecting what our food platter constitute of. Also, it is visible that celebrity do not rely on fried, spicy diet instead their dietician makes their chart where all food is mixed of organic veggies and they pay more attention towards physical exercise. For instance, a famous interview of Kareena Kapoor suggested that in order to stay fit and fine, it is now mandatory to consume home cooked food. Moreover, there is a huge tax on beer and people think twice to buy it resulting in balanced consumption. Thus, by inculcating tax on ready to eat food will keep people away from these bad habit.
To recapitulate, I would rather say, eating favorite food to satisfy tongue craving is good till the time it is not hampering the health. So it is vital for the government to come up with tax scheme on certain food items to keep country healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...s, consuming unhealthy diet, it has now became obligatory to charge more tax on these ...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...became obligatory to charge more tax on these kind of food items. To be very precise, I st...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...us to eat food like breads and buns. To begin with, it has commonly been notice...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
... only elders are giving the priority to these food but also kids love to eat burgers and p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74611398964 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50155526269 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588082901554 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8828985177 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.764705882 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7058823529 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306054898859 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092119595111 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446373524862 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190050713327 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224600299459 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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