In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian
diet.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Undoubtedly, there is an escalated trend of consumption of vegetarian food in numerous nations. Even though proliferation in the intakes of vegetarian meals would intensify the demand of vegetation in all over the globe, the assets associated with this vogue outscores the prejudices as vegetarian food protect the mankind from the chronic pandemic.
Since the hike in the ingestion of vegetables would give birth to the elevate demand of vegetarian food, thus the farmers have to adopt the malpractices to cater the demand. Seemingly, the scarcity of land forces the agriculturists to surge the usage of pesticides and insecticides to enhance the yield which would eventually welcome countless deadly ailments. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted by WHO, in the gone calendar year , the excess usage of chemicals in farming to increase the output leads to cardiovascular and kidney diseases among the denizens of India. Therefore, burgeoning demand Vegetarian diet primarily consist of herbs, grain and different types of vegetation which guarantees high amount of nutritional values, easy to digest and safety from epidemics. Though non vegetarian diets also have high nutrition, it possess the threat
of incurable diseases. Also, it is biased to overlook the fact documented by American Health Council that the pivotal reason behind the occurrence of pandemic named COVID-19 is non-vegetarian diets. Therefore, vegetarian meals provide the humanity immense energy and protect from the peril of dangerous and incurable ailments.
To conclude, although the culture of vegetarian food would increase the demand of vegetable products and proffer the false measures to increase the yield, the benefits of adopting it definitely overshadows its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60074626866 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96763263653 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8838651269 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.1 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120658888536 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480966348362 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269574165121 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748699028178 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180600714351 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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