In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems
The idea that a marriage should be arranged by the parents of the couple, or by other
members-of the family, is quite acceptable to some societies, yet completely out of
the question for others. It all depends on your cultural expectations.
In so-called western societies, it is very unusual for marriages to be arranged.
Most young people would not welcome the idea that their parents have the right to
choose their partner for life. They feel that arranged marriages deny them their
fundamental right to choose, even if they make a bad decision.
However, if we are honest about it, we might acknowledge that some parents organise
their children's lives in such a way that they are likely to meet and marry
partners the parents approve o£ It could be
said that this is, to some extent, similar to an arranged marriage. It is always better
when families support the relationship and welcome the grandchildren.
People for whom arranged marriages are the cultural norm often argue that the
likelihood of the marriage lasting is greater when it is set up in this manner. Parents
can be assured that their children are joining a family of similar standing and cultural
background, and this, in the long run, makes for a more stable society if your parents' marriage was arranged,
and has worked well, then why should you question the custom?
The important thing to ensure is that people are never forced into a marriage which will
make them unhappy or lead to an unequal relationship where one partner
is exploited by the other. This applies in all societies and situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd June at 10 am. I am extremely sorry but I am unable to come to an interview ...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Yours sincerely, James Walker
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, really, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.01111111111 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11560924302 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3645669857 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336701545978 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112882793438 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910166508086 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20036697704 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875955300166 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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