From the past few years, it has been quite common to take one year gap after school rather than straightway jump into college. Although this trend is beneficial to some extent but I would agree that its demerits are more significant.
To kick off, I believe that this development has far more drawbacks. One of them is inconsistency as this spent a year in serving any job for in travelling, defined it hard to get along with studies later. In addition to this they get rooted either into job satisfactions or travelling purposes. Besides this, another major disadvantage is that they solely left with the low grade jobs. As a result, the board down in petty jobs where chances of promotion or other rewards are highly minimal. For instance, a research carried out by the Melbourne University which reveals that 75% of the population who involved in small scale jobs such as labours, call centre employees have secondary education. However, it is apparent that there is a direct relationship between jobs and the qualification of person.
On the flip side, it is worth noting that students no longer remain bookworm. Moreover, the get opportunities to have their hands on the things , they are supposed to study further. This means that they might have practical approach to their subjects. Nevertheless, it is not advisable to take one year off from studies.
To recapitulate, according to above preceding discussion, I am highly in client to my notion. Even though both have its own good sites but still advantages of this trend carry more weight age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9391634981 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76810500217 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669201520913 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2703404785 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15952410006 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445122734798 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263868324047 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783698539427 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405010993084 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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