Dear Mr John ,
I am writing to draw your attention towards the problem I have encountered last week. I am working as a maths tutor in your academy 'bright'.
To kick off I chose this job to meet my daily expenses. Moreover, I was in need of part time job to pursue my for the studies .Although my experience has been quite good since I joined but from the last week, I felt some of my colleagues have become hostile and non cooperative. More than that , they are keeping an eye on me while I work. Due to this peculiar behaviour, I am finding it difficult to continue this job as my patience has pushed to the limit.
Lastly , I would like to beseech you to address this problem and take immediate action over it . you can either shift me to the other branch if possible. Besides , please summon a meeting to make the environment friendly. Thank you for your consideration.
yours truly,
ayari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Mr John , I am writing to draw your attention ...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ly expenses. Moreover, I was in need of part time job to pursue my for the studies .Altho...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rt time job to pursue my for the studies .Although my experience has been quite go...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... time job to pursue my for the studies .Although my experience has been quite good since...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ile and non cooperative. More than that , they are keeping an eye on me while I w...
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Line 6, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...atience has pushed to the limit. Lastly , I would like to beseech you to address ...
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Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...roblem and take immediate action over it . you can either shift me to the other br...
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Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...lem and take immediate action over it . you can either shift me to the other branch...
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Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to the other branch if possible. Besides , please summon a meeting to make the env...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ly. Thank you for your consideration. yours truly, ayari.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, lastly, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48170731707 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57320943833 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701219512195 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.829211804 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8181818182 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19090160583 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663804185206 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580563710985 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121741634684 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610923005078 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.